DIAGNOSTIC WRITING (corrections)

DIAGNOSTIC WRITING (corrections)

ESSAY

Nowadays the situation of finding a jog has been representing a problem for many people, especially; the recent graduates, unemployed, and people over forty years old. This is a result of the lack of job and possibilities of growth that is causing a serious situation in the economy of every family. However, this type of difficulties are only faced by people that have some disadvantages in comparison from others that get a little help from relatives working in those companies.

It is considered that some of the advantages that people could have from getting a job from their family members start with being easily accepted from the company and might get an important position in the respective enterprise. Also these people do not face any difficulty or the fastidious long processes of admission and evaluation. In addition, it is thought that this recommended people would receive a considerable income for their services at the company even if their time is not enough. Not forgetting the facilities of absences given when they present any familiar or health problem, including the respect on their vacation permission.

Additionally, recommended people do not face many business or personal problems with their mates due to their company´s position. Moreover, they could get the great chance of meeting very important people around the enterprise environment and at the same time getting a remarkable knowledge because of the experience learnt from all that business relations.

To sum up, when there is a family member at a company and a relative is looking for job it would have some facilities to developed himself due to the directly relation, so it could be recommendable to have this type of connections or contacts to get some help in an easy way.

E-MAIL

From: Vanessa Hernandez

To: Angela Hewit

Dear Ms. Hewit

I am sending this e-mail because I am interested in applying for the vacancy of Strategy Marketing Analyst. That is why I want you to know that I have three years of experience in this type of job at Colgate´s Marketing Department.

I hope your schedule is not so busy. Could you please tell me the dates for the interview? Also could you send me the address of the company?

I look forward to your answer.

Sincerely

  Vanessa Hernandez